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Sports help to build peace in the world. Do you agree or disagree?

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Along with the global development, playing sports has become common in recent years, people not only enjoy physical sports,
such
 as tennis, football and badminton, but
also
 electronic-sports which just require player logical thinking. Whether sports help us to establish a peaceful state in worldwide has aroused people’s discussion. I completely agree with the given statement.
This
 essay will offer some compelling reasons why sports will bring many benefits to a stable and thrive world.
To begin
 with, team working is one of the most crucial factors that bring
sportspeople
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sports people
 in all over the world
more closely
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closer
 together. When national players from different countries join in a team, they have to work and compete with others. By
this
 way, the more they know about the various
culture
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cultures
, the more familiar they find from their teammates.
As a result
, people solidarity as a precursor to the strengthening of international solidarity.
Besides
 the aforementioned benefit, it is true that people can gain many advantages when taking up a sport, from bettering
health
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the health
 to staying happy. Certainly, if all the residents in a country are healthy and happy, that nation will become stronger in terms of economy, society and defence. For a particular example, after playing sports, the government leaders may release stress and think in a positive way about a political issue. That means, they can find some suitable solutions for that national problem,
then
, peace still remains and no war happens. In conclusion, sports with many potential benefits provided above, I believe that the government should encourage people to play sports, not just for a healthier life but
also
 a more peaceful and prosperous society.
Submitted by Giang Nguyễn on

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