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Why don’t people take environmental issues seriously in spite of being given many warning by scientists? Why don’t people save energy in their daily life? Discuss the possible causes of these phenomena and give possible solutions.

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It is irrefutable to say that an environmental problems are becoming increasing by leaps and bounce by inhabitants in spite of scientists has given remedies.Individuals are not trying to rescue energy. Contamination should decline by inhabitants as well as an industry and companies. The essay shall discuss both prospective view from the bird's eye view up to arriving a concrete answer. There are measurable contexts for contamination in an environment which done by individuals.People think that ministry has been responsible to collect garbage from home to recycle companies in spite of the inhabitants are throwing garbage on the road.The possible solution is people should segregate both dry and wet garbage. Another point is pollution caused by private cars as well as public transportation because individuals are using an excessive own car than walking so that the phenomenon could lead the air pollution. The solution is inhabitants should use car pooling option as well as private vehicles. Not stand with that, people would not like to preserve energy because they do not have values of natural remedies. Authority has been providing 24/7 electricity in cities as well as rural areas, they are using an excessive electricity supply as well as water supply. People are not saving fuel,
although
 law given the warning them, the inhabitants would like to use the vehicle as well as walking. As a solution, government should slap on the wrist against over utilizing electricity as well as water supply.
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