With all the problems in the world today, spending money on space exploration is a complete waste. The money could be better spent on other causes. To what extent do you agree with this view? Give reasons for your answer and give any relevant example or experience you have to support your answer.

The spending on
exploration is considered to be beneficial, but to some extent.It needs a huge amount, we will be getting to know about the hidden facts about the
space but
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space, but
to the other side its
important to spend the money on providing facilities to the people to improve their standard of living. I agree with the above given statement.
To begin
exploration find us the newer planets for living, water resources.The younger generation is keen to know about
.We are able to know in time what are the threats' causes to our planet earth.We will be informed before about the occurrence of solar and lunar eclipses.
For instance
, we will be informed before about the meteors occur from the earth side
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and we will be informed prior about the change in weather.
On the other hand
it is
compulsory to resolve urgent issues and basic needs of the society.We are seeing that government has a shortage of funds to spend on people's health
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due to which the government is unable to provide free medicines and free health checkups.Our health care system should be improved.Major hospitals charge a huge amount, and for the middle class and the upper class human beings, they can't afford that much expense which results in deaths without the treatment.
For example
, due to
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pandemic, many people are loosing their lives as they have shortage of money to treat their diseases.
Moreover medicines
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Moreover, medicines
, masks, gloves and much safety items are sold at double rates due to the increase of demand. In a similar way many people are dying due to hunger.Countries like Africa, Syria they don't get to have a proper meal throughout a day. Equally, many people are jobless, government should create jobs to improve their standard of living. To summarise, I agree that
of spending much amount on
exploration it would be preferable to spend to increase the people's standard of Living.
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