The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It has been observed by
health
experts that overall
Suggestion
the overall health
health
of all the human beings is expected to follow downward trend
in the approaching years.If questioned, I confidently bolster the statement to a major extent.My inclination is explained in the ensuing paragraphs with appropriate reasons and relevant examples.
The Suggestion
a downward trend
the downward trend
foresmost
argument experts put ranking above all others
foremost
fortth
is that forward in time or order or degree
forth
quality
of Suggestion
the quality
food
is degrading day by day.In the race of providing food
to more and more people, farmers are using excessive
Suggestion
excessive amounts
an excessive amount
amount
of fertilizer and pesticides.Eventually, these lower the nutrional
value of every of or relating to or providing nutrition
nutritional
vegetables
as well as fruits.Due to Suggestion
vegetable
this
, people belive
that they are having healthy accept as true; take to be true
believe
food
in form of vegatables
and fruits but they are not.edible seeds or roots or stems or leaves or bulbs or tubers or nonsweet fruits of any of numerous herbaceous plant
vegetables
Moreover
,
the modern sedentary lifestyle will Accept space
,
influenced
the Suggestion
influence
health
of people in devastating way
.
General public Suggestion
devastating ways
a devastating way
spening
huge of the act of spending or disbursing money
spending
amount
of time
in playing video games, doing desk job
, watching TV and so forth.Suggestion
a desk job
desk jobs
Becuase
of Suggestion
Because
that thay
spent Accept comma addition
that, they
that they
that day
least
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the least amount
amount
of time
in playing outdoor games or doing any activity which requires physical effort. To cap it all,
people because of their hectic work scheduled have no Accept space
,
time
to prepare or cook meal
for Suggestion
meals
a meal
themself
so they will consume reflexive form of "them"
themselves
readymade
meal or fast made for purchase and immediate use
ready-made
food
which contains huge
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a huge amount
huge amounts
amount
of sugar and fat.For instance
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facing
severe Suggestion
faces
is facing
health
issue such
as obseity
and high cholesterol and these are more than average fatness
obesity
result
of bad eating habits.
On the flip sideSuggestion
a result
the result
,
some Accept space
,
optimistic
believe that with the technological advancement in Suggestion
optimists
health
care peole
have better (plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
health
than what they have at present
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the present time
time
.They opine that scientists may invent more healthy food
as well as easy way
to Suggestion
an easy way
mantain
our body in perfect shape.
In a nutshell, it can be concluded that keep in a certain state, position, or activity; e.g., "keep clean"
maintain
inspite
of scientific advancement in Suggestion
in spite
health
care, if we do not alter our eating as well as working habits we have to encounter severe health
issues in upcoming years.Submitted by urmila on
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