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Today’s food travels thousands of miles before it reaches customers.Why is it? Is this positive or negative trend?

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It is a common scenario nowadays to transport eatable products to far off places in order to reach out to customers.
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consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
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why
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in my opinion
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advantages
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the advantages
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 trend
outweight
be heavier than
outweigh
outweighed
outweighs
 its disadvantages. One of the possible reasons why
transportation
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 of eatables is globally practiced is ever-increasing
world
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 population. Due to
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it becomes impossible to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 the needs of the people with domestically produced
food
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 and
therefore
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food
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 is imported.
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 relaxed trade policies and ease of
transportation
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 has made it a reality too.Not only
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curiosity and need to relish our taste buds with
plethora
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a plethora
 of options available in the
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 has made it compulsory to trade
food
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 products across boundaries. One justification behind supporting
food
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transportation
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 is that it is a best solution to combat hunger in the
world
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.To elaborate
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owing to adverse geographical factors
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it is nearly impossible to produce
food
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 in every part of the globe.In order to supplement the ever increasing demand of
food
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it is of utmost importance to make
food
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 travel to starving nations.
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African countries are crippled with many pressing issues and hunger is worst among them
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therefore
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 eatables traded
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with
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 countries are a boon to its natives.In
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issues of unavailability of
food
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 to many have been tackled to a great extent.
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, it gives us the freedom to choose from myriad options available to eat in any nook and corner of the
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fruits
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 as kiwi and avocados
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which are not indigenous of India are now available in every
fruitstore
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fruit store
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, trading
food
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 can have a detrimental effect on
environment
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the environment
 as well as public health.
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transportation
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 involves heavy trucks and vehicles causing emission of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere
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thus
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polluting the environment.
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, preservatives are used in eatables to increase the shelf life which
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affects
affect
 human body adversely.
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preserved
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 is low in nutritional value
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therefore
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 it could not be an alternative to locally produced nutritional
food
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. To conclude
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it can be reinstated that
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 trade has a lot of benefits for consumers throughout the
world
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the possible drawbacks can be handled efficiently
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by
 use of advanced technology.
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