Learning english at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local language and if so , how ?

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English is a gateway to the world and no one should
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deprive
of the opportunities that arise for those with a strong command of the English
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does not mean that local languages are dispensable,
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. They have an important role to play in supporting education, including English
language
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education. People who insist ok prioritising local
language
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are often those who can speak fluent English themselves. Advocates of minority languages need to be fluent in English in order to research their field and support the cause at international conferences. In doing so,
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, they are
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demonstrating why English is so important. Learning English allows people to gain knowledge, communicate with
socitey
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
society
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themselves as individuals and have a global impact. It is unfair to willingly dispossess people of
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ability in order to preserve tradition. But
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does not mean local languages can be forgotten or downplayed. People are more likely to succeed- not just
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as
learning English, but in employment and education generally- if they are immersed in a community rich in history and tradition. Local dialects are a part of
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tradition. Efforts to regenerate and celebrate indigenous cultures in recent decades have demonstrated that the preservation of local languages and the teaching of English are mutually-reinforcing developments. In
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way, the local
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serves as a bedrock for learning English, rather than being an obstacle in need of removal. Local languages should be taught at school. Employment for those who speak English as well as one local
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.  I think it is important for everyone to learn
English but
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English, but
I feel it is unnecessary to frame learning English and keeping local languages alive as conflicting possibilities. Each goal supports the other. We should focus on how best to develop both English and local languages
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local contexts.
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