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Developments in technology have brought various environmental problems. Some believe that people need to live simpler lives to solve environmental problems. Others, however, believe technology is the way to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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 technological era where the main purpose of
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 is to provide high production, comfort and efficient use of available resources with a minimal human effort. There is a debate going on that the technical innovation impacts on
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environment
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the environment
. Some people believe that, It pollutes the surroundings while others opine that it is invented to solve the issues related to the
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. I believe that,
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 detriments the
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. To commence with, At the one end, There are several innovations which
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 harm to the surrounding.
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 of all, the invention of the vehicle, which uses fossil fuels to run and exhausts the carbon dioxide, which contributes to the air pollution and global warming, which has become a severe issue for human life.
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, in bygone days, the use of the bicycle is
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 friendly.
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, the surge in the electronic waste by astonishing invention of the computer and mobile
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. It is true that, mobiles and computers have many positive impacts, but these electronic wastages pollute the
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 because it cannot be easily decomposed.
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, the automation industry has a great impact on production and revenue of the company, but simultaneously it creates a lot of noise by machines, which contributes to the air pollution.
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,
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 has invented the intensive farming, by use of which farmers can augment the food production to feed the ever increasing population by high usage of pesticides and fertilizers which ultimately
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land
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 pollution and become a depletion of
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.
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 to that, plastic garbage becomes a serious issue as it is non bio-degradable and can prevent the
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 to restore the water at a great extend. To recapitulate,
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 will continue to the innovations, but the government should make these available to citizens if it
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. There is no doubt that, research is going on to curb the negative impact on
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 by modifying the existing
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technology but
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technology, but
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 harm to a great extent till now.
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