Developments in technology have brought various environmental problems. Some believe that people need to live simpler lives to solve environmental problems. Others, however, believe technology is the way to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In
this
technological era where the main purpose of
technology
is to provide high production, comfort and efficient use of available resources with a minimal human effort. There is a debate going on that the technical innovation impacts on
environment
Suggestion
the environment
. Some people believe that, It pollutes the surroundings while others opine that it is invented to solve the issues related to the
environment
. I believe that,
technology
detriments the
environment
. To commence with, At the one end, There are several innovations which
cause
harm to the surrounding.
First
of all, the invention of the vehicle, which uses fossil fuels to run and exhausts the carbon dioxide, which contributes to the air pollution and global warming, which has become a severe issue for human life.
In contrast
, in bygone days, the use of the bicycle is
environment
friendly.
Moreover
, the surge in the electronic waste by astonishing invention of the computer and mobile
technology
. It is true that, mobiles and computers have many positive impacts, but these electronic wastages pollute the
land
because it cannot be easily decomposed.
Lastly
, the automation industry has a great impact on production and revenue of the company, but simultaneously it creates a lot of noise by machines, which contributes to the air pollution.
Furthermore
,
technology
has invented the intensive farming, by use of which farmers can augment the food production to feed the ever increasing population by high usage of pesticides and fertilizers which ultimately
cause
land
pollution and become a depletion of
land
.
In addition
to that, plastic garbage becomes a serious issue as it is non bio-degradable and can prevent the
land
to restore the water at a great extend. To recapitulate,
technology
will continue to the innovations, but the government should make these available to citizens if it
doesn
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does
not
cause
harm to the
environment
. There is no doubt that, research is going on to curb the negative impact on
environment
by modifying the existing
technology but
Accept comma addition
technology, but
it already
cause
harm to a great extent till now.
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