In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Digitization has led to changing in the ways that we receive information. I believe that in the foreseeable future there will be no need to use paper-based materials, as everything will be accessible through the electronic
devises
an inclination or desire; used in the plural in the phrase 'left to your own devices'
devices
without any charge. It is undeniable that lately our society has been showing concerns about environmental change.
This
leads to social campaigns, where manufactures are criticized on
production
, using natural resources. In order to preserve the planet’s resources, the possible solution would be the limitation of paper
production
, and making audio or electronic books more popular
instead
. An example of another natural recourse, the
production
of which harmed the planet, would be
coal
the quality of being at a refreshingly low temperature
cool
. Back in the 20th century mass usage of coal affected the amount of emissions,
although
consequently
new sources of energy appeared, making dirty
production
of coal ineffective. Alongside the influence of environmental consciousness, the Internet has mad electronic sources of information more appealing. Not only the Internet provides endless choice of sources, but
also
is economically beneficial for customers. As there is no
production
involved, the price is much lower and makes access to the books affordable.
Moreover
, one could get books and news on the internet for free, which stimulated to be more educated by reading.
For instance
, there is a plethora of online libraries, where you can download a book or a magazine of your choice. One of them is Apple library, which provides the access to all the classical literature on your phone. In conclusion, I reckon that paper based news and books will be unavoidably outweighed by the
electonic
of or relating to electronics; concerned with or using devices that operate on principles governing the behavior of electrons
electronic
options, as they tend to be more environmentally friendly and financially beneficial for customers.
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