Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Health and
educational
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education
services are the fundamental rights of any citizen. There is a debate on providing medical amenities to the public. I completely agree with the notion that, the
government
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should provide the
resonable
showing reason or sound judgment
reasonable
medical services without any price, while other high cost
treatements
care provided to improve a situation (especially medical procedures or applications that are intended to relieve illness or injury)
treatments
treatment
should not be provided as free. To commence with, each citizen is paying the various kinds of taxes to the
government
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;
such
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as the property, income
,
Accept space
,
vehicle tax and
inreturn
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in return
they are expecting free medical facilities by the ruler.
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, in rural areas, where even find the basic medical treatement is tough, if the fundamental medical services are provided freely
then
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even a poor man can get a proper treatement at initial level of a disease or in case of any imergency which It ultimately leads to the economical growth to nation as healthy people can do more work with a high efficiency.
For example
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,
Civil hospital
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a civil hospital
a Civil hospital
in Ahmedabad offers therapeutic services.
Moreover
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, the state of the art medical services
are
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is
costly and
government
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cannot offer it without charge because of various reasons.
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and foremost, it will create harmful effects on
economy
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the economy
of the nation and create budget related issues. To cite an example, the
government
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has to invest 50% of profit on health improvement facilities.
Secondly
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, most of the diseases are curable at the early stage with a nominal
treatement
care provided to improve a situation (especially medical procedures or applications that are intended to relieve illness or injury)
treatment
.
For instance
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, Cancer and Diabetes can be cured
at
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in
early stages.
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, if high-priced services are offered free
then
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, it creates biasing to the people as
certain group
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a certain group
of people do
hardwork
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hard work
and pay high amount of taxes to the
government
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, while others are doing nothing and even do not pay the tax but can be served with free medical
treatements
care provided to improve a situation (especially medical procedures or applications that are intended to relieve illness or injury)
treatments
treatment
. To conclude,
Although
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it is suggested that basic medical services should be made free as it can be fruitful to every person of the country, expensive and latest
treatements
care provided to improve a situation (especially medical procedures or applications that are intended to relieve illness or injury)
treatments
treatment
should be provided with the cost, as many diseases are cured at an early stage with the basic medical
treatements
care provided to improve a situation (especially medical procedures or applications that are intended to relieve illness or injury)
treatments
treatment
.
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