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some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. to what extent do you agree with this

#people #government #money #arts
One of the controversial issues which causes stigma among masses is the fiscal contributions into media by authority. Prolific amount of citizens considers these contributing factors as squandering budget and have a predilection to capitalize folks services
instead
. I am a partial advocate of
this
 approach and
this
 essay will cover justifications below .             I believe that there are lots of important things in the development of homey that the administration should concentrate on.
firstly
Suggestion
Firstly
, there are no proper medical facilities provided for the people. There are just a countable number of hospitals around the homey compared to the number of people.
for
Suggestion
For
 instance, there is pandemic going on in the agrarian and the government is not able to control it because of the lack of health facilities and the patients who are suffering are suggested to get treated at home. And because of that it is going to be difficult.                
secondly
Suggestion
Secondly
, there is
also
 an issue about other aspects of the development of the homey like unemployment. The people in the bucolic have become unemployed in the past few years has drastically changed  and
also
 because of  the virus and lockdown there has been lots of people unemployed.
for
Suggestion
For
 instance, a survey conducted by the Hindu newspaper on the 13th of July 2020 shows that the people who have become jobless has increased by 50%.           To  conclude, art an important part of the country, but there are
also
 other more necessary things the management should concentrate for the better future of the province.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enriching society
  • promoting cultural understanding
  • development of talent
  • creative industries
  • economic benefits
  • generate revenue
  • cultural heritage
  • identity
  • prioritize spending
  • needs of the majority
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