Some people think success in life comes from hard work and determination, but others think there are more important factors like money and appearance. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There are various ways to define

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mean for

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mean, for

it is

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altered

through different individuals,

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, one element that won’t change is the positive influences bring with

success

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. That makes people drop in deep thinking of it. For some think their successes are

build

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built

up with their daily experience of work and the grand goals which stimulating people to go forward, while others believe that these elements can’t be the decisive key to

success

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except financial free and impeccable

appearance

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. Some sets of people believe that a large amount of property and exceptional

appearance

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are essential for a successful achievement. In life, money can influence others’ judgment on one

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those wealthy people would be more generous

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constant

, they usually won’t elaborate their bills

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compared

to normal people. The

way

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to

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would be much easier for them, for they can generally associate with other resourceful individuals when they are always generous to pay other’s bills. On top of that, physical

appearance

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always the

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standard to value a person’s

behaviors

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

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universal value

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universal values

. When a good-looking employee and a plain-looking employee with the same abilities are in an assessment for a higher position, the boss always would choose the better-looking one to be the direct underling which would make

the good

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the best

looking person on a straight

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to

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.

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, people who have a strong will to goals and determined to make efforts for their ways to succeed are more dedicated human beings. People are growing up with different kinds of wills and the will would bring people to spend more time practicing skills.

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, if a man wants to

success

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in his career, he has to conquer his colleagues by his strong ability which could only be tempered by long-term’s accumulation. By the

way

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, the determination in the mind would always be a stimulus of the executive force. No matter in the workplace or learning place, satisfaction with the present situation without determination cannot bring people back any positive feedback when others who have a strong willingness to succeed are getting better. I personally agree with

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opinion, for when people think that money and

appearance

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are the only

way

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to succeed, they always ignore the hard-working that successful personages paid for their life goals. People always reckless identifying other’s

success

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as innate gifts

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giving up themselves as a frustrated pretension. In conclusion, there are no certain ways to achieve

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,

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, I believe they if people do not put in energies on their

determinations but

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determinations, but

believe in money and

appearance

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, they will not experience the joys after

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success

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successfully

easily

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easy

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