Some people prefer to provide help or support directly to the local community. Others prefer to give money to national or international charitable organizations. Discuss both views and give ur opinions?
While in today life, there are several ways for wealthy people to contribute their
money
to help or improve the life of unprosperous
people in country
. Some people choose to buy essential items and give it directly to the community, Suggestion
the country
however
, others prefer transferring their money
through charity
agencies. Both of these have negative and positive, but i
believe that the best ways refers to the speaker or writer
I
to
backing the needy Suggestion
for
of
is go
to their place to able to help them.
On the one hand, a large amount of people Suggestion
goes
choose
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chooses
donate
their salary to Suggestion
to donate
charity
organizations because charitable institutions are convenient. Many more people can be helped simultaneously as more fund will be raised from various place
. Suggestion
places
In addition
, by the size of these groups and the total of volunteers are advantage
to go and transports aid goods Suggestion
advantageous
such
as food, clothes to hard places like desert. They think remote areas better than individuals.
On the other hand
, it is also
advantageous to directly to the local community because charity
organizations are not always trustable
. They afraid that their Manageable; tractable; hence, moderate; not violent
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money
would be used to wrong ways and go to pocket
of corrupt authorities Suggestion
the pocket
instead
of helping poor people. For instance
, in some provinces of Vietnam, most of
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by
donate
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donating
money
stayed in the pockets of charity
organizations
leaders, beside that, there are Suggestion
organization's
organization
organizations'
also
fraud agencies create to scam people’s money
and disappear without any traces after that. Additionally
, help by this
way is given immediately without any dealing paperwork or waiting a long time.
In conclusion, I totally believe that seding
the context and environment in which something is set
setting
seeding
sending
money
directly to who in need is a good way to help the needy and it is a better way and more effectively than giving the donation to functional organizations.Submitted by Trúc Mi Nguyễn on
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