Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?

In today's world, new technology has greatly influenced the approach people socialized.
In particular
, social networks and dating applications have an enormous impact on the ability to make friends or build romantic relationships, simplifying the search for new acquaintances, just by using the application. Despite possible harmful consequences and problems with "real world"(or “face-to-face”) communication, I believe these technologies have many advantages in terms of people communication and can help users to save time.
First
of all, online apps, social media and messengers help us to keep in touch all of our relatives, friends or close people and be updated with all the news and meetings from the lives of close people. Owing to dating apps, which recently gained popularity, single people now can easily find the most suitable partners with matching interests and hobbies, comparing to the past when it was much more difficult.
Moreover
, in case of particular circumstances,
such
as quarantine, pandemic situation or problems with work or educational placement; online platforms,
for
instance zoom
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instance, zoom
, can be quite a good alternative or even replacement of traditional educational interaction between teachers and students. Move to positive sides, different online social sites and applications help with meeting new people, or maintain existing relationships. Video or audio calls allow us to talk and see our friends or close people from a location anywhere
in
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on
the Earth, regardless of distance; just having
stable internet connection
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a stable internet connection
,
Accept space
,
devices and electricity.
Comparing
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Compared
Comparisons
to the past when people
must to make
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must make
to
visit or
someone who visits
visitor
in order to see each other;
as a
result they
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result, they
can save money (since there is no need to spend it on
transport
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the transport
) and time that was spent on preparing taking hours or even days. In summary, the technology development has been
affecting
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affected
human interaction, it may not always be beneficial, but
nevertheless
I think some possible adverse consequences cannot have a great impact on the positive aspects.
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