you r attending a part time course in college. Due to some problem, you can't continue your course.

I study electrical automation course in
second
semister
one of two divisions of an academic year
semester
at loyalist college.I am writing
this
letter to inform you that due to
family emergency
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a family emergency
I
can not
can not
cannot
pursue my remaining
course
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courses
. Yesterday, I heard from my parents that my grandmother had
heart attack
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a heart attack
and she
want
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wants
to see me. Unfortunately, I have to go back my country and I am not sure when I come back.
Additionally
, my final
exame
a set of questions or exercises evaluating skill or knowledge
exam
exams
will be on
next
week so
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week, so
I will able to attend that. I
would be appreciate
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would appreciate
if I get
break
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a break
from
this
semester and I will be re-join
next
summer intake. I
also require
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am also required
to
same help
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the same help
in order to do with my college accommodation. I look forward to hearing from you. Your Sincerely, Mayur Patel
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