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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

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It is a tendency that less people want to work for a
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 or organisation as they choose to be self-employed. In
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 and point out how
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 could be disadvantaged. There are many reasons why self-
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 more popular. I think the most important reasons is that it is easier to set up a
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 than before. In some countries,
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 registration can be done quickly, and there are many opportunities to do business when the Internet provides a global marketplace.
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,
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 offers greater freedom than working for a
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.
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, while employees are obligated to follow a fixed working schedule set by their employers, self-employers have the freedom to work at times that best fit their needs.
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, there are risks in starting a new business.
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, self-employed people may face financial difficulties. For most people,
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 seems to be a good opportunity to make a good fortune, but they did not see a fact that many businesses fail to make a profit.
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, having a permanent job and a monthly
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 is the only factors for career success especially in my country.
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, being self-employed means that there is a variety in the income, rather than a regular pay from a
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 or organisation. There are no benefits like pensions, sick pay and holiday pay. There is less stable in
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. Another problem of
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 is that it involved hard work, long hours and total responsibility. In conclusion,
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 is a rising trend at a global scale as its advantages.
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, its disadvantages should be considered before choosing to be self-employed.

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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-employment
  • freelancing
  • entrepreneurship
  • autonomy
  • financial stability
  • work-life balance
  • financial insecurity
  • lack of support
  • resources
  • long working hours
  • uncertain income
  • job security
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