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Some people believe that it is best to do the same typr of work throughout your life. Others feel that it is beneficial to change jobs often. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, people have different opinions according to lifetime employment. While some of them are
convincing
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convinced
 that it is superior to be engaged with sole
job
 entire life, others believe that altering
job
 constantly has more advantages. In
this
 case, I consider
first opinion
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the first opinion
 as more valuable. Because, I think, it is better to concentrate on one thing and become a professional
of
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in
 that field. It is thought by some that changing work regularly is more profitable. They think like that, because, by
this
 way, people are able to develop themselves in different aspects, every
time try
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time, try
 something new, and have valuable experience in life.
Therefore
, their
worldview
 would be expanded, and they will have at least little bit knowledge about most of employments.
For instance
, my brother
have worked
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had worked
has worked
 in many types of
job
, so we can rely on him in most of
cases
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the cases
. Because of
this
 reason, these
group
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groups
 of people think that amending profession has more conveniences.
Although
, others and I believe that immersing yourself only in one
job
 is more beneficial. Because, people will become an expert
of
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in
 their field in result of long term experience and theoretical knowledge.
Consequently
, they will gradually have a raise, and
finally
 have a successful career.
Moreover
, they will contribute to
improvement
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the improvement
 of their country. To illustrate, Thomas Edison, famous physic, had made 10000 unsuccessful experiments for creating a bulb, despite
this
, he never gave up and change his profession. What would have happened if he had
leaved
being or located on or directed toward the side of the body to the west when facing north
left
 his
job
? Because of these reasons, I believe that concentrating only on one field is better. To conclude,
this
 essay discussed advantages of changing profession
regularly but
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regularly, but
 why remain it unchanged is superior. I think that not altering
job
 is the key
for
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to
successful career
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a successful career
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job stagnation
  • career advancement
  • networking opportunities
  • fulfilling career
  • deep expertise
  • sense of stability
  • long-term relationships
  • exposes individuals
  • variety of experiences
  • enhance adaptability
  • rapidly evolving job market
  • advantageous
  • overlooked
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