Some people believe that it is best to do the same typr of work throughout your life. Others feel that it is beneficial to change jobs often. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, people have different opinions according to lifetime employment. While some of them are

convincing

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convinced

that it is superior to be engaged with sole

job

entire life, others believe that altering

job

constantly has more advantages. In

this

case, I consider

first opinion

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the first opinion

as more valuable. Because, I think, it is better to concentrate on one thing and become a professional

of

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in

that field. It is thought by some that changing work regularly is more profitable. They think like that, because, by

this

way, people are able to develop themselves in different aspects, every

time try

Accept comma addition

time, try

something new, and have valuable experience in life.

Therefore

, their

worldview

would be expanded, and they will have at least little bit knowledge about most of employments.

For instance

, my brother

have worked

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had worked

has worked

in many types of

job

, so we can rely on him in most of

cases

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the cases

. Because of

this

reason, these

group

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groups

of people think that amending profession has more conveniences.

Although

, others and I believe that immersing yourself only in one

job

is more beneficial. Because, people will become an expert

of

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in

their field in result of long term experience and theoretical knowledge.

Consequently

, they will gradually have a raise, and

finally

have a successful career.

Moreover

, they will contribute to

improvement

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the improvement

of their country. To illustrate, Thomas Edison, famous physic, had made 10000 unsuccessful experiments for creating a bulb, despite

this

, he never gave up and change his profession. What would have happened if he had

leaved

being or located on or directed toward the side of the body to the west when facing north

left

his

job

? Because of these reasons, I believe that concentrating only on one field is better. To conclude,

this

essay discussed advantages of changing profession

regularly but

Accept comma addition

regularly, but

why remain it unchanged is superior. I think that not altering

job

is the key

for

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to

successful career

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a successful career

.