Why don’t people take environmental issues seriously in spite of being given many warning by scientists? Why don’t people save energy in their daily life? Discuss the possible causes of these phenomena and give possible solutions.

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It is true that people do not take care about environmental problems
seriously even
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seriously, even
though scientific researches have been given
a
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an
alart
warn or arouse to a sense of danger or call to a state of preparedness
alert
apart
and people waste a vital energy resource
everyday
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every day
. There are several reasons to discuss and I am sure
that those severe
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that those with severe
problems are able to solve with the
helps
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help
of the
government
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and media.
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, scientific results have kept warning us about the environmental issues that are becoming serious more and more than before,
such
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as hurricanes, drought, and shortage of food. Even though most people do not care seriously, because it only happens the area where few people are
lived
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living
or travel. They hardly believe that they can do something good to solve those bad influences, due to they merely hear that news as a
rumor
gossip (usually a mixture of truth and untruth) passed around by word of mouth
rumour
, or it is not related to the current situation directly.
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, people who live in mainland do not take a melting
graicer
(Christian theology) a state of sanctification by God; the state of one who is under such divine influence
grace
issue seriously, because it does not have
effect
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an effect
on their daily lives.
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, people who less interest in
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environment
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the environment
do not have
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does not have
an awareness to protect
environment
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, due to lack of a vital information from
government
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or media. Because of less the important information by governor, people can not access to information how it
have
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has
a serious effect on our daily lives and what can we do to help the
environment
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.
For example
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,
electorical
relating to or concerned with electricity
electrical
engery
the ability to form mental images of things or events
imagery
energy
is used wastefully and lack of
electoricity
a physical phenomenon associated with stationary or moving electrons and protons
electricity
will become a big problem in our lives. So the
government
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and media should advise us how should we deal with
electoricity correctly
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electricity, correctly
electricity correctly
and it will bring a big change. I believe that the
government
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can do more things as projecting campaigns
thoughout
all the way through
throughout
the media. Having a better idea about the harsh
environment
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issues can make
effort
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an effort
efforts
to protect it.
For example
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, putting
heavy tax
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a heavy tax
heavy taxes
on owning a private car or reducing a plastic bags at supermarkets which it seems a little thing, but it leads us to a big success in someday.
Also
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the media can take part in the campaign to convey the
realistic
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real
problems which
has occured
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have occurred
has occurred
in poor countries
thoughout
someone who buys tickets to an event in order to resell them at a profit
tout
TV shows.
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, the public service advertisement can display people how they can save a water
on
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in
their daily lives and to use as
renewable resource
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a renewable resource
. In conclusion, it is a vital to convince people realize the importance of environmental problems in our daily and make
effort
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an effort
efforts
the effort
to protect the
environment
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with the helps of
government
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and media.
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