You said you would attend your best friend's birthday party, but you did not go. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter apologise for not going explain why you were not there, say how you will make up for it.

Dear Sarah, Sorry, it’s taken me so long to write to you but at
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you why I couldn’t attend your birthday party
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month. To be honest, I was feeling so guilty that I couldn’t gather
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and ended up delaying it. I totally understand how it was inevitable for you to share
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wonderful occasion of your life without me. What happened was, I was studying for my exams that day. I know what you are thinking that I shouldn’t have promised to be available that day as you were already planning on adjusting the date especially for me. I must own up; I wasn’t able to complete my course as quickly as I had imagined. I am so very sorry for the disappointment I caused you. How about we take a road trip
this
weekend? Don’t worry about the expenses, it would be all on me
this
time as a gesture of making up for my mistake. I know
this
resort in Manesar that has the same outdoor activities that you love. I would love for you to come with me and let me make up for the lost precious moments. Again, I am so sorry for the delay in telling you. I hope you can forgive me. With Love, Shilpi
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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