In recent years, television has contributed most to changing the quality of life of ordinary people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In these latter years TV has сhanged enough and bothered to improve quality of individuals’ life. I particularly can not disagree with

this

statement. The reason why, if there was no television, humanity would never have been able to use and raise their imaginations of

thoughts

Suggestion

the thoughts

in the head, with the help of which the greatest discoveries are created

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In the early years, people were shocked by invention of

first

televisions, in where images of moving of alive humanities. Even they thought, that inventors killed people,

then

put in a box with a blue screen and were scared to death. All was due to being illiterate and not familiar with the highest technology.

However

, by the time, humans perceived the truth and continued to be interested in different plots.

Thus

, television became one of the greatest wonders of a modern age

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It is a means of entertainment as well as education and has a great importance in teaching science

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Additionally

, there are

education

Suggestion

educational

film companies, which devote their time to picture lives and habits of

animals insects

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animals, insects

fishes

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germs and numerous other forms of life, gives people chance to observe the secrets and creations of the world around us with

easy way

Suggestion

an easy way

. Obviously, as it is not hard to get hold of comfortable lifestyle, we get used to modern technologies even it is impossible to imagine our modern life without them. To conclude that, the invention of the television raised the standard of living and the mind of people. And could get rid of illiteracy and changed their outlook on

world

Suggestion

the world

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