Some people think that parent should teach children how to be good member of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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responsibility to

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build

up our society and make it better. Some people think that children should teach by their

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, while others think that should be taught at school by

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teachers

a teacher

. In

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an analytic or interpretive literary composition

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issue

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sides

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a fact or assertion offered as evidence that something is true

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agreement

and give my own point of view.

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are the closest relationship with their children and they

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live together that make

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parenting

can control the behaviour of

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children

the child

a child

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is likely doing something in a

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person who can discover the issue and find the right way to talk to them.

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parent

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the parent

is a model for their

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who is in childhood to learn how to be a better person.

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a child

children

the child

always likes to

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imitate

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, the

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's behave will be

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influencing

their

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child

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children

how they become a better person.

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teacher

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the teacher

is educated that make them are more logical and cognitive. The best example is

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teacher

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a teacher

can teach critical thinking to student and make them know how to judge things

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good or bad.

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the teacher

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has an experience to deal with varied people,

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means they are more likely to have a good communication skill and life experience. It is a

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financial assistance in time of need

benefit

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the student

students

if they learn some of

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these skills

before they enter the workforce. In conclusion, I believe that children are

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more beneficial

more benefit

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teach

at school by

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teachers

a teacher

. It is because they will have access to a qualified

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to learn critical thinking and develop communication skill.

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