Some people think that parent should teach children how to be good member of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Everybody

have

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has

responsibility to

built

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build

up our society and make it better. Some people think that children should teach by their

parent

, while others think that should be taught at school by

teacher

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teachers

a teacher

. In

this

eassy

an analytic or interpretive literary composition

essay

issue

I will

concider

deem to be

consider

both

side

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sides

of the

argrument

a fact or assertion offered as evidence that something is true

argument

agreement

and give my own point of view.

Parent

are the closest relationship with their children and they

also

live together that make

parent

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parenting

can control the behaviour of

child

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children

the child

a child

.

For example

, if the

child

is likely doing something in a

worng

not correct; not in conformity with fact or truth

wrong

worrying

way, their

parent

also

the

first

person who can discover the issue and find the right way to talk to them.

Secondly

,

parent

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the parent

is a model for their

child

who is in childhood to learn how to be a better person.

For instance

,

child

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a child

children

the child

always likes to

imitation

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imitate

.

Consquantly

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Consequently

, the

parent

's behave will be

influence

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influencing

their

child

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children

how they become a better person.

On the other hand

,

teacher

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the teacher

is educated that make them are more logical and cognitive. The best example is

teacher

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a teacher

can teach critical thinking to student and make them know how to judge things

that is

good or bad.

Additionally

,

teacher

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the teacher

is

also

has an experience to deal with varied people,

this

means they are more likely to have a good communication skill and life experience. It is a

benifit

financial assistance in time of need

benefit

to

student

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the student

students

if they learn some of

these skill

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these skills

before they enter the workforce. In conclusion, I believe that children are

more benifit

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more beneficial

more benefit

to

taught

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teach

at school by

teacher

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teachers

a teacher

. It is because they will have access to a qualified

teacher

to learn critical thinking and develop communication skill.