Some universities deduct students’ work if an assignment is given late. What is your opinion and suggest some alternative actions?

The pupil's
work
has
decline
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declined
by a teacher if learner given an assignment after the
time
limit. An
eduction
the activities of educating or instructing; activities that impart knowledge or skill
education
addiction
deduction
is an obligatory to become philanthropic and
metrimorious
person
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personified
,
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,
however in
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however, in
my
opinion i
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opinion, I
opinion I
would say that
circumsatances
your overall circumstances or condition in life (including everything that happens to you)
circumstances
causes a
delays
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delay
in
student
's life. The essay shall discuss the statement from the bird's eye view up arriving a concrete answer. There are
determantel
(sometimes followed by 'to') causing harm or injury
detrimental
circumstances which can lead the
dealy
in a sincere and heartfelt manner
dearly
in an educational
assignments
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assignment
, the
first
reson
a rational motive for a belief or action
reason
reasons
resin
is
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is, student
student
can be
suffred
undergo or be subjected to
suffered
by
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from
the
contagenous
easily diffused or spread as from one person to another
contagious
disease, so in
this
situation teacher should understand and give them another
time
limit. Addition to
this
, pupils have not
time
from
down
the first light of day
dawn
to dusk because they have
monotonus routin
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a monotonous routine
monotonous routin
monotonous routine
monotonus routine
in
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on
the job, so
univercity
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the university
university
universities
can enhance
time
limit for students rather than
duduction
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a deduction
deduction
deductions
of
work
.
As a result
, learners can
benifited
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benefit
benefited
as an extension of
dead line
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the deadline
deadline
deadlines
and they would complete the task. There are some suggestions for students who can frame the
circulam
an integrated course of academic studies
curriculum
work
as well as another,
firstly
the
uniersity
the body of faculty and students at a university
university
students can segregate subjects due to hours
,
Accept space
,
so they can get
time
for studies as well as
work
.
Secoundly
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Secondly
, if the
student
is in an under of umbrella of
deases
run or move very quickly or hastily
dashes
disease
then
they should write an assignment with the help of an artificial
spaker
someone who expresses in language; someone who talks (especially someone who delivers a public speech or someone especially garrulous)
speaker
although
the
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The
family member can help to write the task. Not stand
with
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by
that,
university
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the university
can
also
help for the pupils in enhancing the target with
help
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the help
of students.
For example
Gujarat university
has been reducing
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has reduced
the task for working
student
as well as hospitalized pupil. In conclusion, I opine that
university
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universities
the university
a university
should not detain
student
's
work
insted
in place of, or as an alternative to
instead
of help in circumstances and campus must be suggest options as well as
cuting
the activity of selecting the scenes to be shown and putting them together to create a film
cutting
quoting
curtain
marks.
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