Discuss advantages and disadvantages of using products which made by another country.

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These days, people able to buy goods which made by

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

countries.It has valuable benefits,

although

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it impacts to increasing national economy of

government

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the government

.Following essay discusses both

side

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sides

this

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argument.

Firstly

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, the main

favor

promote over another

favour

flavour

of using import product is multiple choice.

This

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advantage gives customers the opportunity to select produce within their size, fashion, taste and price.

In addition

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, people able to try products which can not grow in their region with helping of exports.

For instance

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, cherry of North American

origin its

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origin, its

hard to find in Thailand because of geometric limits.The population of these countries

such

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as Thailand, will probe commodity another continents and will make them delighted. Despite the fact, that international companies are very

expensive but

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expensive, but

still purchasers utilize

this

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way of production.

As a result

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, many local companies can't set up

business

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a business

and it brings to loss of job, influence to Gross Domestic Product of government.Transborder partnerships,

such

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as, Amazon marketplace, AliExpress and others be

possesed

influenced or controlled by a powerful force such as a strong emotion

possessed

plenty more demands rather than district firms.

Furthmore

in addition

Furthermore

, comparison of prices is the biggest drawback of

this

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practice.

Difference

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The difference

between import and export costs rises day after day

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Some

areas

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area's

populace not able to pick up foreign nutrition. In conclusion, purchasing products made by other countries has numerous choices to pick the best suitable for our requirement.

However

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, it

affect

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affects

is affecting

local business owners and lead to loss of jobs. In my point of view, both

has

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have

the equal positives and negatives.

ArianaThu Jul 30 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

235 words

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