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Write an essay to describe a local cuisine that you know well.

When referring to grilled
fish
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, connoisseurs cannot skip La Vong grilled
fish
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 with about 150 historical years in the capital of Vietnam or called Hanoian
specialty
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Specialty
speciality
. The origin of
this
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dish
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 is from the French colonial times. Doan family, lived at 14 Hang Son Street, made the
fish
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dish
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 for the resistance military at that time. After that, the family not only specialized in
sale
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the sale
 of the grilled
fish
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dish
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 to earn their living, but
also
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 support the army. Gradually,
Hang Son Street
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the Hang Son Street
 is called
Cha
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Ca
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CA
 Street
although
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 there is only one restaurant selling
fish
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 pie. Because in front of the restaurant’s gate had the sculpture of “La Vong”, the patrons named it “
Cha
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ca
Suggestion
CA
 La Vong”. After the grilled
fish
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 is almost cooked, food is displayed on the table with a clay brazier and a hot pot. In fact,
foreigners even
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foreigners, even
 Vietnamese people enjoying
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Cha ca
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the Cha car
Cha car
Cha CA
Cha cat
 at the
first
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 time have to ask how
this
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dish
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 is tasted. When
Cha
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ca
a motor vehicle with four wheels; usually propelled by an internal combustion engine
car
 is put into the
heating
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heated
pan
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pan, then
then
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 gets golden brown, add into your bowl some vermicelli, peanuts,
conriander
Old World herb with aromatic leaves and seed resembling parsley
coriander
, sauces and savour the delicate aroma between mouthfuls of La Vong grilled
fish
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. If guests enjoy
this
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fish
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dish
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 without any ingredients, it can be a pity. In short,
Cha
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ca
Suggestion
CA
 La Vong is one of the Hanoian well-known cuisine that domestic and international visitors must try.

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