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Some people believe that one-on-one lessons are better for learning while others think that group lessons are superior. discuss both views and give your own opinion

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We can see 2 groups of people with different points of view. When the
first
 group prefers individual lessons, their opponents have another opinion. So, who is right? I think both opinions are one-sided.
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. On the one hand, one-to-one teaching allows the teacher to concentrate on one student, which is useful when studying the exact sciences. At the same time, group lessons give more socialization, which has a beneficial effect on language learning.
However
, do not forget about each student's character Based on the available data, we come to the conclusion that everything depends on the chosen subject, coupled with the student's sociability
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