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Some people believe that one-on-one lessons are better for learning while others think that group lessons are superior. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #lessons #group
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Different people have different opinions on what constitutes the best lessons. While the majority of people choose to
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
 in
group
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 lessons, some choose one-on-one lessons, hoping that they will not be distracted and will work harder on the lesson. I believe that pupil
benefit
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benefits
 more from
group
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 lessons. The more
student
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 there are in the
group
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 the more interesting and effective it is for a
student
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 to
learning
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learn
 than in individual study. The main of one-on-one is that it
is allows
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is allowed
pupil
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pupils
a pupil
 to independently choose the days and time of classes,
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 to set schedule you need. But getting used to communicate only with
teacher
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teachers
a teacher
 in the future when connecting with other people you may
fell
undergo an emotional sensation or be in a particular state of mind
feel
 insecurity. At the same time, the classes in the
group
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 are more varied and the learner gets more intercourse. When
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student
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a student
the student
go
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goes
 to
group
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 lessons they
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 gain
such
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 skills, as ability to socialize, build friendships etc. Without these skills
student
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 will not be able to learn or work effectively in the future and mainstream
group
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 lessons has
clear advantage
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a clear advantage
clear advantages
the clear advantage
 over one-on-one in
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 regard. To summarize, while one-on-one lessons
offers
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offer
 some advantage, it does not give disciple enough opportunities to develop their social skills and
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 make friends.
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 why I think that going to
group
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 lessons is superior.
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