Many people think that more money will make them happier. How important is money for happiness?

It is the belief of many, that the more money they have access to, the happier they will be.

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vital money is, to an elated state of being.

Firstly

, with financial stability comes power and freedom.

This

can be illustrated in a comparison between the attitudes of

people

that are employed and have a stable source of income, and

people

that are without a job. The former often exudes more joy, and are usually more confident than the latter. The first group's behaviour can be

as a result

of the knowledge that most of what they want, can be purchased.

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, when a rich person

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sad, they can easily indulge in happy foods

such

as cakes and ice cream, which can help them out of their bad mood,

such

action will be quite difficult, almost impossible for a poor person.

Also

, studies have found a strong relationship between poverty and depression.

People

living in abject poverty have been discovered to fall into depression a lot easier than others existing in standard living conditions.

For instance

, developing countries have a higher number of depressed

people

than the developed ones. The inhabitants of these struggling nations often complain about the state of their country, and

while

a lot of financially indisposed citizens find themselves becoming bitter

due to

their inability to change their environment,

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is usually the case for a wealthy

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, as they can easily go for a vacation in an exotic island, or even migrate to a totally new area, in a bid to get their mind off the situation of their locality,

instead

of wallowing in hate and

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like their disadvantaged counterparts. In conclusion, fiscal buoyancy is directly proportional to an individual's state of mind, and the higher the amount at your disposal, the more joyful you will be.