Many people think that more money will make them happier. How important is money for happiness?

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It is the belief of many, that the more money they have access to, the happier they will be.
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vital money is, to an elated state of being.
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, with financial stability comes power and freedom.
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can be illustrated in a comparison between the attitudes of
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that are employed and have a stable source of income, and
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that are without a job. The former often exudes more joy, and are usually more confident than the latter. The first group's behaviour can be
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of the knowledge that most of what they want, can be purchased.
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, when a rich person
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sad, they can easily indulge in happy foods
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as cakes and ice cream, which can help them out of their bad mood,
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action will be quite difficult, almost impossible for a poor person.
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, studies have found a strong relationship between poverty and depression.
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living in abject poverty have been discovered to fall into depression a lot easier than others existing in standard living conditions.
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, developing countries have a higher number of depressed
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than the developed ones. The inhabitants of these struggling nations often complain about the state of their country, and
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a lot of financially indisposed citizens find themselves becoming bitter
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their inability to change their environment,
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is usually the case for a wealthy
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, as they can easily go for a vacation in an exotic island, or even migrate to a totally new area, in a bid to get their mind off the situation of their locality,
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of wallowing in hate and
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like their disadvantaged counterparts. In conclusion, fiscal buoyancy is directly proportional to an individual's state of mind, and the higher the amount at your disposal, the more joyful you will be.
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Task Response
Ensure that the essay directly addresses the prompt question and focuses on discussing the importance of money for happiness. Include a clear thesis statement that reflects the main argument of the essay.
Coherence and Cohesion
Improve the logical flow of the essay by organizing ideas more clearly. Use transitional phrases to connect sentences and paragraphs, ensuring a smooth progression of ideas throughout the essay.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • subjective
  • universally
  • cultural differences
  • psychological factors
  • satisfaction with life
  • emotional balance
  • personal achievements
  • social connections
  • fulfilling relationships
  • sense of belonging
  • sense of purpose
  • physical health
  • well-being
  • financial stability
  • mindfulness
  • gratitude
  • positive thinking
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