The bar charts show data about computer ownership, with a further classification by level of education

The given bar graphs show data on the

percentage

of the year 2002 to 2010 both

by comparison

of total population and education level. As is observed from the given graphs,

the

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computer

ownership

increased over the

years

and

this

ownership

among the

people

with higher studies was higher than others.

According to

the first graph, more than 50%

people

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of people

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owned

computers

in 2002 and

this

percentage

kept on increasing over the

years

. After 6

years

,

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percentage

reached

to

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over 60% and

finally

in 2010 the

percentage

of

people

who owned

computers

reached

to

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over 70%. From the

second

bar graph, we can observe that the

percentage

of computer

ownership

increased with the education level; i.e. the higher the education level the higher the

percentage

of computer

ownership

.

For instance

, 15% of the

people

who had High school

graduation

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owned

computers

in 2002 and

this

percentage

were

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was

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about 60 for bachelor’s degree holders and over 80 for

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postgraduate degree holders. After 8

years

, in 2010, the same trend could be observed and the

percentage

of

people

who owned

computers

increased significantly compared to 2002.