We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it the clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweigh the advantages. To what extent do u agree?

It goes without saying that the contemporary era is that of technological advancement. Owing to the problems that the

internet

has imposed on the confidentiality of sensitive data, its demerits sometimes appear to

supercede

take the place or move into the position of

supersede

the merits. I,

however strongly

Accept comma addition

however, strongly

disagree with

this

, and render the

internet

an indispensable service to humankind. Primarily, the

internet

has almost taken over control of our lives.

This

is because, the users allow it to do so by giving them access to personal information and pictures, which has resulted in the opening of

doors

Suggestion

the doors

of the dark web into our lives.

This

enables it to trace and keep a record of every user that enters it.

For example

, a majority of individuals upload their private pictures on Facebook, which may get leaked and fall into

wrong hands

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the wrong hands

.

Thus

, the

internet

has inevitably led to serious privacy concerns all over the world.

On the other hand

, the

internet

has some very obvious benefits as well. It helps students in acquiring knowledge, aiding them to complete their assignments on time. It has brought people from different parts of the world closer together, which would have been

otherwise

impossible. Individuals from different age groups can read their favourite books online, at the ease of their homes, without having to go to the libraries. E-commerce is becoming increasingly popular as well. The consumers are provided with an abundance of choices by the retail outlets, which they can peruse as well as purchase.

For instance

, Amazon, which has now become a household name, is a prime example of a one-stop shop.

Hence

, the

internet

has made life easier and more convenient in a multitude of ways. To recapitulate, I strongly opine that the

internet

has a plethora of positive impacts on our everyday life. The concerns of control and confidentiality of the private information raised by it can be managed well if handled prudently and not allowed to overshadow its numerous other benefits.