Environmental issues have always been an international problem because governments are not imposing harsh punishments against offenders. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Support your answer with specific reasons and example?

Despite knowing regarding the significance of preservation of
environment
Suggestion
the environment
, people
has been destroying
Suggestion
have been destroying
have destroyed
this
for many
years which
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years, which
has become one of the paramount problems all over the world. It is thought by some that
this
is due to the negligence attitude of the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
towards the conservation of the
environment
.
However
,
this
phenomenon can be acceded partially which will be
discoursed
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discussed
and exemplified below. To instigate with, these days, it can be witnessed that trees are being cut down indiscriminately by an
abundance
Suggestion
abundant
number of people in order to build various types of institutions, skyscrapers and so one. And while doing
this people
Suggestion
these people
this person
most often destroy vegetation and animal's natural
habitate
the type of environment in which an organism or group normally lives or occurs
habitat
.
Moreover
, the utilisation of cars has
also
been increased over the
last
decade that causes air pollution.
In addition
, when human activities are connected with harvesting and capturing a natural resource
,
Accept space
,
the resource becomes exhausted,
For instance
; too frequent fishing does not leave time for fish to reproduce and makes them disappear. Turning to the flip side of
this
statement, The
government along
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government, along
with every individual residing in a society have several sorts of responsibility to protect the
environment
.
Firstly
, better public transportation should be introduced so that people would not be exhorted to use their personal cars. A case in point, in Malaysia a vast number of their population
utilise
Suggestion
utilises
public buses, trains which make their country pollution free and has successfully deterred the problem of traffic congestion.
Secondly
, the public should be careful about their
activities especially
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activities, especially
with regards to throwing garbage or plastic materials in any random places.
Lastly
, the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
ought to be enlightened the people about the serious consequences of
this
issue. In
this
way people will be more conscious about the
environment
and will never destroy and overuse its resource. Agglomerating all the views elaborated above, it
cane
airtight sealed metal container for food or drink or paint etc.
can
be concluded that, human activity that change the
environment
have
negative impact
Suggestion
a negative impact
on the world's ecosystem.
Nevertheless
,
Accept space
,
this
can be lessened by protecting natural areas and bestow knowledge to the people as to
this
problem. The society must assure these dimensions that are to be taken as soon as possible to prevent
this
issue from
deterioraring
become worse or disintegrate
deteriorating
further
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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