Young people are much more aware of and concerned about issues like the environment, poverty, and animal welfare than previous generations. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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Nowdays

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Nowadays

youngs people

shows

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show

are showing

more interest about issues like

enviroment

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the environment

environment

, poverty and animal welfare than their parents. I generally agree with

this

statement for several

reason

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reasons

Firstly

young generation

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young, generation

, can

cleary

without doubt or question

clearly

see what are the result of not caring about

this

kind of

probelms

a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved

problems

Nowdays

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Nowadays

also

thanks to the globalization and

internet

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the internet

, there are

much

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many

more evidences and

informations

a message received and understood

information

available,

for example

media are delivering and considering

this issues

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this issue

these issues

more often.

Also

youth are educated in school to be more aware about pollution and animal welfare compared to previous generations.

Secondly

, it's noticeable that national

goverments

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

governments

are trying to

mitigare

lessen or to try to lessen the seriousness or extent of

mitigate

the negative effects of

this issues

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this issue

these issues

, creating law and

regulamentations

that protect the

enviroment

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

and Animal welfare.

For

example

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example, this

this

trend it's

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trend, it's

observable for the Oil & gas sector, one of the most polluting industry in the world. In the

last

years a huge number of regulation and directives that operators of that

industru

the people or companies engaged in a particular kind of commercial enterprise

industry

industrious

industries

must comply with, are created in order to avoid natural

distaster

a state of extreme (usually irremediable) ruin and misfortune

disaster

Furthermore

, in these years the old generation wasn't educated to the respect of the

enviroment

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

and to all the issues that the

pullution

undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities

pollution

population

can create. Overall,

the young

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younger

the younger

generations are much more aware and a better understanding of global issues than the older one, the should continue to take all the necessary measures to preserve our planet.

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