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Describe one of the most famous museum that you know well

#museum
Coming to Hanoi, visitors cannot skip
visting
the activity of making visits
visiting
 the Vietnam Museum of Ethnology ranking the sixth in the top 25 most fascinating museums in Asia. The museum comprises of three main show sectors: the Trong Dong Building, outdoor
exhibition
, and Southeast Asia
exhibition
 area. Visitors will be drawn
by
Suggestion
from
 the scientific and logical presentation from beyond, and easily ensure the uniqueness of different cultures strongly influenced by each ethnic minority’s one. There are two separate areas in the Trong Dong
exhibition
 building, one is a thematic showroom and is often presented in the
second
 floor, while downstair you can have an insight about the differences among Vietnamese 54 ethnic groups with an incredible 15,000 artifacts collection, 42,000 footages and photographs portraying daily life, clothing, instruments and religious convictions as well as ethnic minority customs. Outdoor
exhibition
 Visitors can
also
 explore the distinctive architecture of indigenous people. The Tay
stelt
a column of wood or steel or concrete that is driven into the ground to provide support for a structure
stilt
stayed
 home, the Yao storey farmhouse, the Hmong constructed with
pomu
a keyboard instrument that is played by depressing keys that cause hammers to strike tuned strings and produce sounds
piano
 wood, the Viet house with brick facade, etc.
are
Suggestion
Are
 already on display. There are abundant saplings among the dwellings, snaking pathways and a flowing creek, a large wooden mortar used in
dehusking
 rice of the Dao people located in the garden. Southeast Asia
exhibition
 Academic events, concert halls, digital spaces, cultural exhibits which are related to both Vietnam and the ASEAN countries are open to tourists.
This
 is the connection, friendship and collaboration not only in
south-east
the compass point midway between south and east; at 135 degrees
southeast
Southeast
southwest
asia
the nations of the Asian continent collectively
Asia
 between Vietnam and
neighbors but
Accept comma addition
neighbours, but
neighbours but
also
 other regions of the entire globe.
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