In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Access to technology has increased significantly over two decades, and the children playing games increased too. Really in
this
days children much hour spends front of plural of "this"
these
computer
and Suggestion
the computer
computers
a computer
this
attractive for themselves. I am against, like many parents.
With regards to the advantages, playing computer
games can develop children’s cognitive skills. As a result
, another good point is that when playing games, children can feel relax and have fun. In fact, they might reduce their stress when playing many popular games with vivid imagery and sound effects for example
: Pugb, counter strike and others. These mobile and computer
games are very famous in Uzbekistan. And games help at the same time give work with a team.
On the other hand
, these games take many hours than our plan's time. Computer
games distracting focus on study and this
fall we more expensive. Usually children think games frequently and speaking about levels. Second problem
is lighting normal sit in front Suggestion
The second problem
computer
must be 60 Sm but many times we can see children don't follow that rule, especially in game point. If games have more kill, kick, stab and shoot that impact children's character they lead to with aggressive. Finally
, if parents tell their children "you must go sport", that help children's interested real life. For example
: my mother is saying I only benefited things, a two years ago, she is saying I must go swimming and this
me helped growth in height.
In conclusion, there are benefits of computer
games, but there are disadvantages too. So parents need their children to focus more. Children should play games with under control of their parents.Submitted by Javohir Eshquvvatov on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite