You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell me how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his/her performance. give details of your music-related activities. explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities.
Dear Satinder,
I am very happy to see your performance today. I am writing
this
letter to give you feedback on your performance as it is fantastic and I enjoyed it.
It was an awesome experience for me to attend your concert as you are my favourite singer and yesterday was a red letter day for me because I saw your performance which is one of my dreams. Your melodious voice rejuvenates me and gives me so much energy that I forget all my worries. Moreover
, I love music as I prefer to listen to music or sing a song in my free time. Furthermore
, I love to participate in various music activities in which playing a guitar is at the top of my list.
I would be so much delighted if you would help me to learn how to play musical instruments like
Flute, and drums as you are a master in these things. I request you please find some spare time for me so I can able to learn musical activities.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
LoveSubmitted by tajinder.panag on
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