Prison is the best way punishment. Do you agree or disagree ?
It is considered that cell is the best approach to punish people who have committed a crime. I completely agree with
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as protecting our society, rehabilitating criminals.
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, nowadays crime is growing day by day. Linking Words
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, the government must protect their citizens from any violence. If they don't, it can lead to bad consequences, Linking Words
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as burglary, robbery, assault, and others. Linking Words
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, violence in the United States has reached a high level because the government has afforded citizens the right to use weapons and it is leaded to so difficult issues. In Linking Words
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case, lockup can be a suitable approach to reduce crimes because offenders are under control, and they have no chance to escape from there and commit the crime again.
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, while in prison, the criminal begins to appreciate freedom. In Linking Words
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case, their behaviour will be much better than in the past. Currently, the most jails provide rehabilitation for offenders, including training and psychological support. In Linking Words
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way, they can rethink what they did in the past and feel regret for not making Linking Words
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, after being in penitent criminal can find jobs in any place and lives like abiding citizen.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that, prison is the best approach to protect citizens from violence, and it causes them a sense of regret, in Linking Words
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case rehabilitation of the criminal can help to find solution any problem after being in prison.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite