E-mail has had a huge impact on professional and social communication, but this impact has been negative as well as positive. Do the disadvantages of using e-mail outweigh the advantages?

In today's world, e-mails are playing an important role in everyone's life.These
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have great
impact in communication processes.
However I
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However, I
believe that despite having a lot of advantages, it has few disadvantages
also
. E-mails have a plethora of benefits. It is helpful in sending necessary and
lengthy
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long
longer
messages in just a few seconds. As well as it is very helpful in getting
quick response
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a quick response
to a message.
For example
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- In traditional mails, a
person
has to compose
message
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messages
in written form and sends it via post, it was quite time consuming as it requires more
paper work
work that involves handling papers: forms or letters or reports etc.
paperwork
too. But emails can be sent anytime. These have a role and importance in social communication
also
. As we know that we can send text, pictures
,
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,
videos and pdf files
etcetera
through emails. It is very much time effective and easy. The data and information sent by emails
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are
more secure than the traditional mails as well as these are cheaper. Along with positivities, it has some negativities
also
. E-mails
keeps
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are kept
the
person
busy all the day, like an employee receives a lot of messages from customers and everyone wants an
immidiate
of the present time and place
immediate
response to their e-mail.
Although
he/she has to go
theough
from beginning to end
through
though
all the mails,
as a
result it
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result, it
makes a
person
with a hectic and pressurised schedule. Other cons of e-mails are like if a
person
lacks the knowledge about using technology, he/she utilise it properly.
Infact
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In fact
, there is a need of an internet connection for
this
purpose. If you are in a remote area where network facilities are nil
than
subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
the emails cannot be seen and replied.
Hence
it may cause loss to both of the sending and
recieving
get something; come into possession of
receiving
emails parties. To conclude, emails have advantages more than disadvantages as it has eased and raised the level of communicating whether it is in business or social context.
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