Today more and more young children have electronic gadgets such as computers and mobile phone. Some people say that this is a positive development in children’s education, others argue that the use of technology among young children do more harm than good. Write an essay to discuss the effects of technology on the education of young children. Include reasons and any relevant examples to support your answer.

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The diagram illustrates different stages in the life of a honey bee. Overall, there are five main stages in the development of the honey bee, from egg to mature adult insect. It is

also

noticeable that the complete life cycle lasts between 34 and 36 days. In the

first

stage of the life cycle, a female honey bee lays one or two eggs every three days.

Then

between 9 and 10 days later, the eggs hatch and the immature insects

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or nymph, appear.

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Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

84 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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