Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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writing is no longer necessary in modern communications because it will take too long, time for both sender and receiver. I agree with the statement, as modern communications are quicker and faster than
the
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later writings.
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essay is going to talk about modern communications and
traditional
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letter writing
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method
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Letter
writings are quite useful for older or earlier
people
. In ancient
days
,the only
way
to communicate with other
country
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was
letter
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writing. So that
people
could learn education as well by reading and writing. One who knows to read or write letters was rare in those
days
. Through that other
people
also
learnt education. Which has been reduced
now a
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days
.
For example
,through modern
communication
reading and writing has become in
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short way
,
people
started breaking and shorted the words. In modern
communication
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people
would convey
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messages quicker and faster. So that
people
could know the
information
faster.
For example
, through modern
communication
like - mobiles, Internet, and fax any
information
regarding office purpose work can be done soon. In fact, the personal
information
we wanted to convey has become easy.
People
don't have to wait to know about good or bad news, which saves time as well. So,
this
essay agrees with modern
communication
which has made
easy
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to send and receive
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messages and
information
. Which saves time too. In modern
days
only quicker and faster
way
will be useful.
For example
,
people
living in another country, are able to communicate through
internet
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in a fast
way
with their family and friends which feels
people
in a good
way
.
Hence
modern
communication
is the best
way
.
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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