Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time?

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Nowadays, education has an important role in our lives and many students, as well as their parents believe that it is necessary to get an education as soon as possible and
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get to
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and
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an adult life. Certainly, there is another group of students who considers that it is necessary to have some time before entering
university
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for travel or
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experience. In my opinion, the choice of a future profession and enrolment to the
university
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is a very significant step and I am rather inclined to agree with
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opinion that
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gap is quite useful for the future of students. One of the most important features for
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interim year is to spend it quite productively. I am familiar with several examples from real life, when people decided to take an annual break, found some temporary part-time jobs and eventually did not return to any serious
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. Another example is that not having the opportunity to be left alone with their thoughts, following some advice of their relatives, students make the wrong choice and
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result they
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result, they
will totally change their kind of activities or continue to
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on their unloved job for the rest of their lives.
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, I would like to stress that in some countries,
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in Russia, boys after they have graduated school have a military duty and former (recent?)
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faced with a serious choice - whether they will go to
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or to serve in the army.
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, many people simply aspire to enter any
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regardless of their interests in order to postpone
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process. To conclude, I would like to point out that
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issue everything depends on the student’s personality – in case if they are going to spend
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time wisely and find answers to their questions, they definitely should get
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year.
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, if
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solution just an attempt to postpone the beginning of adulthood,
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I do not think that
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is a good decision and it is able to lead to the positive consequences.
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