Some people believe that international sporting events are the ideal opportunity to show the world the qualities of the hosting nation. Others believe that these events are mainly a large unjustifiable expense. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Global sporting events like, The football, The
world
cup, and The Olympic games are the great events to display the hosting country standards in honouring, while some commentators argue that these events are not worthy in terms of spending huge amount. This
essay will discuss both the points of thesis statement by taking examples from newspaper journals.
To begin
with, global sporting gatherings are the greatest opportunities for the organizing nation to showcase their culture to the world
by respecting the guests in their style, like to welcome them with traditional dances which are mostly practiced in India. In fact, this
could help to spotlight the nation's quality to the world
about how they receive guests. For example
, the recent cricket world
cup which was hosted by India welcomed all the players into the field by traditional dances and songs. Hence
, this
gave the global attention on Indian style of welcoming guests.
However
, there are some commentators who argue that international sporting events are very expensive. This
is because hosting country is spending a huge amount on it to showcase their standards to the world
. As a result
the government is using a lot of tax payers money in terms of giving luxury hotels to the players. The recent survey run by The Times of India revealed that the Indian government spend 20 million rupees for 2017 cricket world
cup. Therefore
, it is conclusively clear that organising such
an expensive event with public money is not recommended.
In conclusion, considering both the points, i
strongly believe that hosting an international sporting event is a great privilege to expose the nation's quality of living. refers to the speaker or writer
I
However
, there should be a certain limit on the budget which should not exceed more than it is required.Submitted by Jo Hn on
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