Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree with this view? What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life?

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In recent years, some people have views that it is more likely to get a satisfying
career
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if the goals are set in early age, while there are opponents who have different ideas.
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, I partly agree with the view that people should decide what they will do in the future. On the one hand, there is
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important reason that it will give them a goal and direction when people set up a
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path early.
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, people will focus their time and energy on those that can help them to achieve their targets, so it is beneficial for people who want to do some certain careers.
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, for those who want to become doctors, they can prepare in advance in some subjects
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as math, physics, chemistry and biology. In comparison, it is impossible for others who decide to be doctors after graduating because above eight years of professional training in universities is required.
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, I agree with those who argue that not every is suitable to decide their
career
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in early. What we think is that many people can not understand the details of all
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jobs
in early stage, so they
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do not have
the abilities to make decisions.
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, there is a kind of people that they prefer to do various works, which can give them a feeling of challenge and
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excitement
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, there is not doubt that a satisfying work life depends on a variety of factors
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as a high salary, a friendly working environment and
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an
inspirational boss. In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, I believe that it is certainly to get a satisfying
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if people decide to do early, especially in some
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particular
works, but
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obviously
can not
can not
cannot
for everyone.
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