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What are the Advantage and Disadvantage to having one language in the world?

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The development of
tourism
 contributed to English becoming the most prominent
language
 in the world. Some people think
this
 will lead to English becoming the only
language
 to be spoken globally. It is no doubt that English has been growing day by
day especially
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day, especially
 the advancement of
tourism
.
However
, there are others, who believe that
this
 trend may lead to English to become a sole
language
 of the world. While there are many benefits for
this
, some
drawbacks
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drawbacks, also
also
 need to consider. World
tourism
 has transformed the popularity of English to an advance level.
This
 is because need of a common medium which enables everyone to have better communication
,
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,
that is
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born
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bone
 of any
tourism
 sector.By doing
this
, more and more people knowingly or
unknowmly
without knowledge or intention
unknowingly
 start to learn
this
language
 and increases the popularity of
this
.
However
, those who oppose
this
 view
point consider that
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point, consider that
this
 trend may have negative impact globally.
First
 and foremost is that indigenous
language
 will be abandoned by the young generation, which would cause the dying of
such
languege
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
languages
 and slowly extinct from the world itself.
This
 situation not only limit there
,
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,
but
also
 ripples could
be visible many
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be visible in many
be visible to many
 other areas
such
 as tradition, customs, and culture. In conclusion, even though having a single
language
 has many positives, negatives cannot be
neglacted
disregarded
neglected
.
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