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In many countries, people are concerned about the number of children who are overweight. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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Obesity
 is becoming
one
 of the main concerns among children in today's world.
This
 is
one
 of the growing concern among the youth.
However
,
this
 is due to the unhealthy intake of food by children.
This
 can be solved by building a healthy
diet
 for children and making them aware of the risk involved with being obese. Unhealthy
diet
 is
one
 of the main reason of
obesity
 among children.
This
 is because nowadays, children intake large amount of calories and fats. Most of the unhealthy intake is taken by them in their school.Parents are unaware of these unhealthy
diet
Suggestion
diets
. These diets are reasons of their ailing health.
For example
, according to a survey children in western countries consume more 37% than the rest of the world.
However
, these problems can be eliminated by educating children about
obesity
 and the consequences of being obese and
secondly
 by developing a healthy
diet
 for them.Designating certain period in school educating children about
obesity
 will help them to know more about healthy and unhealthy
diet
. Developing personal
diet
 charts for children and balancing fats and calories can help them to stay healthy and live a long life.
For instance
, Teaching children about healthy life will help them more than imposing rules to eat less unhealthy food. In conclusion, the rate of
obesity
 among children is increasing at a high rate.
However
,
this
 can be slowed by spreading awareness about the consequences of
obesity
.
Moreover
, unhealthy diets should be reduced in school as it is
one
 of the main causes of being overweight.
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