It is often said “when in Rome, do as the Romans do”. Do you think people should adapt and accept the culture of the country they visit? Do you think it is possible to learn a culture without learning the language?

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For a long period of time society has been developing a certain body of laws, along with customs and rules as the distinctive features of cultural heritage. At the same time, the issue of behaviour in the environment distinguished from the usual one has aroused heated discussions since the formation of moral bases. What philosophy of life should exist in any community?
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with, people can ease staying in the
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tremendously by adapting and accepting the style of cultural traditions.
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, in some oriental nationalities even clothes can carry some strict messages - there are types of clothing that do not allow knee-opening and décolletaging for both men and women.
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, people must respect the customs of the region the arrive in and wear the clothes typical for that area and follow their morals.
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model of behaviour, aforementioned above, is beneficial for the
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case they will be highly welcomed in the
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of their arrival.
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, there are several factors that play an essential role in understanding cultural mentality that give a definite answer to the question if there is any possibility to penetrate into the traditional layer with no knowledge of even the basics. The ability to maintain the dialogue in the
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of the hosting
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provides a deep dive into the local atmosphere. To put it differently,
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is not only considered a method of communication, but
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a way to experiment and explore the local habits and ways of living.
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, the lack of knowledge in the mother tongue of the
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you stay in will prevent from tourists in participating in daily activities of the locals. Despite that, the knowledge of the native
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cannot be adopted as a unique option to understand the natives. Far from that – the universal
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way we speak about English) can be used as an alternative. Analysing all the issues mentioned, it can be concluded that respecting foreign traditions while visiting their territory is a significant point of a successful visit. Learning some everyday expression for an easy communication is
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very advantages.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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