In some countries people's weight has significantly increased while their level of health have decreased. What do you think may be the causes of this problem? What solutions can you suggest to solve this problem?

There is no doubt that our world has been facing different kinds of environmental issues.While some believe that political leaders are responsible to tackle
this
, I strongly think that it is not only limited them, even common people
has
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have
significant role
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a significant role
to play. Those who consider leaders should act against problems of environment argue that they have
power
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the power
to take
decesion
the act of making up your mind about something
decisions
decision
that can control unlawful act of citizens.
In other words
, implementing stricter law and harsher punishments to law breakers can be done by them.
For instance
, throwing plastic wastes in the surroundings and cutting trees and burning fuels are some of the bad habits that can
polute
make impure
pollute
pollutes
polluted
our earth in a dramatic way.
Role
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The role
of leaders in
such
senario
an outline or synopsis of a play (or, by extension, of a literary work)
scenario
scenarios
is that enforcing
law
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the law
laws
a law
to reduce the ill effects of
this
in a great extent.
However
, I would argue every individuals need to take part in the process of protecting our nature from any harmful effects.
This
is because leaders may have some limitation to control over the behaviour of their followers.
Therefore
, it is better to educate the society the significance of keeping the earth free from any kinds of damages that can have detrimental effects on the nature.
This
can be made possible by using natural products
instead
of artificial ones and car pooling can be
better option
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a better option
to reduce the number of cars on the road. In conclusion,
although
leaders of the society have a crucial role in the
environmel
issues, the responsibility could not be limited to them, in my viewpoint, the society, as a whole, has to take its own stand to fight
against
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against any such
such
any ill- effects
this
.
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