You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter • say how you heard about the plan • explain how you feel about it • ask for more information about it

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request

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that the council decided to

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a shopping

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shopping

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mall in our

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. I have just seen your developer plans in the local newspaper. Let me explain our situation in more detail. We were living for a long time in

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location. Many householders have chosen here for the reason that there are loads of parking

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and recreational

centers

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for families.

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place has

took

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an award as the quietest place in

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area. Having seen your advertisement, I really feel inconvenience

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the new project will take us all the specific features. I and other families are so worried and we are expecting some more details. We would be grateful

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you could inform us

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further

information and so we will know what will happen. As our request is very urgent, a quick

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would be appreciated.

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faithfully,

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