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It is generally agreed that society benefits from the work of its members. Compare the contributions of artists to society with the contributions of scientists to society. Which type of contribution do you think is valued more by your society? Give specific reasons to support your answer.

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It is the fact that the country is getting benefits from famous persons
such
 as Artists and Scientists. They are equally participating in helping people at their level. In
this
 essay, I am going to differentiate both contribution and will give valuable feedback at the end of my essay. On the one hand, most paid performers are offering their most of the income to the public. Countries
such
 as India, China and Pakistan has more villages where they fight for food and place.
For example
, Mumbai slum area, there are 40,000 people who suffering every day with hospitalization and difficult to survive. The dramatic artists not only contributing their money, but
also
 running Orphan old age homes to help who lost their families. For an instance, the Tollywood hero Cheeranjivi started blood bank, eye bank,
also
, running a few of the charitable trusts to help the poor people in the population.
On the other hand
, researchers are working hard for the country to develop health and financial sectors by living away from the home. The technologists may be not recognized as like Artists but their contribution to the society is unforgettable. We are not here without them,
also
, we may not run on 4G or 5G today. We are very honoured for them. As I mentioned above, they are equally contributing to the society, but compared to scientists the Artists more participate. Because they do acting in movies, perform some stage shows,
moreover
, they run a private business, so in my way of thinking, there are chances to earn more and donate for the people.
Submitted by Arjun Yada on

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