Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some believe that building a landmark for a
city
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is a crucial in some good ways. While others insist that a budget should spend on upgrading schools and medical facilities. I will consider both perspectives and conclude with my own opinion.
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, some cities has kept constructing some remarkable constructions for some reasons. These places play a significant role in a landscape of
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city
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the city
cities
and showing a representative. The places,
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as the Tokyo tower in Japan, or Marina-bay-sands hotel in Singapore, those can measure how those countries are a success by remarkable building. People who were attracted by these construction are willing to visit them that contribute to the income of
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city
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the city
,
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beneficial movement effect on neighbours retail stores.
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, some insist that schools and medical care centre should be focused on more than building more landmarks. In my perspective,
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is
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true that a
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should be a side of caring local facilities. By allocating money into important health facilities, local councils can assure greater access to
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as those facilities while the astonishing building can only impress tourists.
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, if there happens a severe outbreak disease or natural catastrophes, the work of paramedics and place of giving a medical care will be what humans suffering from those situation truly needed, not largely constructed amazing building. In conclusion, to construct an impressive landmark would be appreciated as gaining money from visitors, but
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income should be used to enhance local facilities and prepare for disasters.
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flow of cash can lead a
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to flourish for good.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Architectural grandeur
  • Iconic edifices
  • Economic catalyst
  • Cultural landmark
  • Urban fabric
  • Sustainable development
  • Public services
  • Fiscal responsibility
  • Community well-being
  • Infrastructure investment
  • Urban planning
  • Holistic approach
  • Government stewardship
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