Nowadays some professionals such as doctors, lawyers and engineers are paid much higher than ordinary workers. What do you think of this trend? Are there any jobs which you think should offer higher salaries?

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Nowadays, Many people argue that medical, law and technical professional, earn higher than people doing ordinary jobs. In my opinion, these deserve to get paid more because of hard and long learning courses and money engaged to finish

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this courses

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this course

these courses

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, there are still some jobs which

also

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need to get paid more.

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, In order to have a degree

such

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as doctor, engineer and lawyer

student

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has to go under tremendous pressure.

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is much more than other courses. Apart from that, the

study

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length of

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programs

are

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minimum four to five years and in

case

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the case

of doctors master degree adds more four years.

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, according survey conducted by the Government of India, an engineering

student

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has to write 120 assignments and

study

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48 subjects.

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, if

student

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undergoes

such

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difficult

study

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than they should earn more.

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, the cost to become a doctor or engineer is high.

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colleges

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college

have

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has

very high

fees

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fee

structure which is not affordable by all, which push many of

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a university student who has not yet received a first degree

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took

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take

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study

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student

loans.

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, if a

student

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tooks

carry out

takes

took

an educational loan, the instalment of

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loan will start right after the graduation date.

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, he/she must be getting a good salary as a significant amount of money will be diverted into

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loan.

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, some of the jobs

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as teacher and military person should

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have

high

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higher

pay levels.

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The teacher

is the one who shapes the future of the nation. If he/she has to look for other jobs because of low salary,

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we are making a miserable future for our nation.

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to that, forces

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as navy and air forces keep the country safe. They are the one who

are serving

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is serving

the nation and must have a good paycheque because of their effort to keep us safe. In conclusion, a growing trend of receiving

high

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higher

pay scale for jobs, particularly for doctor, engineer and lawyers is acceptable because of course duration and finance needed to achieve the degree.

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, it is the responsibility of government and society to focus on the pay rates of on other sector to maintain a balance in the job market.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Compensation
Expertise
Income disparity
Societal contribution
Automation
Scarcity
Market dynamics
Infrastructure
Professional ethics
Economic disparity
Undervalued
Meritocracy
Vocational skill
Job market
Wage gap

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