Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

In
trading world
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the trading world
, It is
chellanging
requiring full use of your abilities or resources
challenging
to get fresh
food
. People's
dependency increasing
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dependency, increasing
day-by-day on frozen
food
. Some
short we
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short, we
can consider
this
is
neccessary
absolutely essential
necessary
due
the
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The
different kind of requirements, but
this
is will not good for environment and
country's economy
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the country's economy
. The transportation of supply
take
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takes
longer time of
food
to reach end consumer and The cost to keep
food
in eatable condition
also
impact the economy and for that government should be
control
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controlled
or put some regulations. The very
first
thing is, when we are shipping the foods like
vegitables
edible seeds or roots or stems or leaves or bulbs or tubers or nonsweet fruits of any of numerous herbaceous plant
vegetables
, fruits too far from the cultivating area
were
In or at or to what place
where
farmers are farming, The freshness of
food
destroyed.
Also
, many
time
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times
industries
uses
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use
chemicals to keep those
food
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foods
in eatable position. The kind of process really not only damage the
environment but
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environment, but
also
not good for health on
longer
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the long
long
run. The packaging materials and higher use of poly wrapper will damage on
local surroundings
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the local surroundings
. The
second
thing is, Whatever the cost needed to keep eatable items in fresh condition, will be
charge
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charged
to consumers.
Consequenselly
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Consequentially
, the product
cost increasing
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cost, increasing
day-by-day and very hard to manage by middle class families; They have some other priorities
also
, like
children education
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a child's education
child's education
children's education
, mortgage.
This
is making the penalties over the country's
economy which
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economy, which
is considered more
dengourus
involving or causing danger or risk; liable to hurt or harm
dangerous
. In conclusion, to keep healthy and safe environment and
financial
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financially
strong to
community
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the community
,
Government
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the Government
should keep control to trading the
food
and avoid transportation of
food
to far away.
Also we
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Also, we
everyone
need
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needs
to promote the local
food
that will help to local farmers to keep their supplies.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon emissions
  • transportation
  • environmentally friendly
  • economically beneficial
  • local farmers
  • local economy
  • fresher
  • nutritious
  • food security
  • imports
  • preserving
  • traditional farming practices
  • biodiversity
  • limited variety
  • availability
  • cost
  • contributor
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