Nowadays more and more people want to live by themselves. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative trend?

There
is
Suggestion
are
no doubts that commercials have a significant role in the sales of products and services.
However
, some people think that people can be negatively influenced by
consumeristic
world, others argue that
this
can bring positives to both the service providers and their customers.In my
opnion
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
, customers need to use their critical thinking power before buying things. On the one side of consumerism, those who believe that
this
can have a negative impact on
people life
Suggestion
a person's life
person's life
the person's life
is that creating an artificial needs.
This
means, by viewing these adverts on a regular
intervels
a definite length of time marked off by two instants
interval
, pester them to purchase these, without having
real need
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a real need
of them especially, they just associate the image of
succes
an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
, power and
postion
the particular portion of space occupied by something
position
possession
bastion
of the product rather than
requirement
Suggestion
requiring
such
things in their
day
to
day
life.
For instance
, buying a luxurious car is often wastage of money as
this
expensive car may not be
nessary
absolutely essential
necessary
for many
costomers
someone who pays for goods or services
customers
costumes
.
However
, there are some positives can be seen regarding the adverts.
Firsty
Suggestion
Firstly
First
, by
viweing
the display of a motion picture
viewing
commercials, viewers may get an idea of different brands of the same products and they can compare them, choose the best product according to the
buget
a sum of money allocated for a particular purpose
budget
of the buyer.
Additionally
,
this
inform
Suggestion
informs
the real bargains and new brands in the markets and
impcts
the striking of one body against another
impacts
impact
of these items on the environment can be understood. If the information do not available, buyers may be
ended
Suggestion
ending
up in buying things without having much
choices
Suggestion
choice
.
For instance
, different kinds of soaps, which have the different purpose, like glowing skin, healthy skin and so on. I, personally, believe that even though some drawbacks can be seen about advertisement,
this
helps the people to understand
variety
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a variety
of products in the markets. In conclusion, while customers have different opinion on use of commercials in our
day
to
day
life, I strongly consider its usefulness rather than its ill effects.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Insomnia
  • Sleep deprivation
  • Circadian rhythms
  • Productivity
  • Stress
  • Anxiety
  • Cognitive function
  • Melatonin
  • Sleep hygiene
  • Globalization
  • 24/7 economy
  • Blue light
  • Sleep patterns
  • Sleep maintenance insomnia
  • Irregular working hours
  • Lifestyle factors
  • Emotional well-being
  • Health consequences
  • Flexible work hours
  • Quality of life
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